i wanted to see what you thought of some of my lyrics
this first song is called
the war is on
chorus
here i stand in the gates of heaven
there they go soldiers flow
as they walk down through the valley
of darkness with a heavy load
a light so bright these warriors will be surely known
fearless in their steps, the path by god is shown
verse 1
this story is of sacrifice by the ones that we don’t know
here on earth the batlle, there the angels go
hand in hand they march, so the humans get the gold
know there’s warmth out there fighting against the cold
hatred fuels a fire, the gealousy curse is known
watch your steps if your taking the stairs below
there’s creatures in the night, that will hunt your very soul
damned away from the light, their freedom don’t unroll
it only comes with the one that paid the bloody toll
verse 2
the story of man has paced into glory
to face the waring pages of life
souls rise enraged to the fork in the road
eyes smile to break the cages
and be bought with love
we sought the broken pieces
to enlist and stand gloved, blow a kiss
and rage weith the gift of the power above
the final hour will speak with sight
be careful if you seek man
they can fight.
WILL THEY WALK WITH US
they try to talk to us, will they walk with us
you join them when you die and someone chalks youir ass
their from the finest selection, we need their protection
these lost souls that used to be a part of us
brothers and sisters now without the body can fight much harder than us
merge the worlds, protect this earth that shines like a pearl
choking on the pressure we begin to hurl
compose yourself, grab some druge dose yourself
get ready for war, earth united we could be much more
come with aggression we’ll be out to settle a score
best on the battlefeild to the dancefloor
man what a species, any thing that comes here we’ll smash those crepies
we ain’t acting and our enemies we’ll be compacting.
i hope you like them
rythmick